Raven's Not That Girl

Raven's Not That Girl: Moments in Raven Robin History

The End Part 1, the scene I call... Drama.

'Hands touch...'

He lifted my hands,

'Eyes meet...'

And said, "That's what friends do."

'Sudden silence, sudden heat...'

And I said, "And as my friend, you have to let go..." and broke free of his tight, comforting grasp.

'Hearts leap, in a giddy whirl...'

I icolated them in a transe of my magic as I walked up the long, endless, stone stairs.

'He could be that boy...'

As the darkest magic surrounded me, I heard that beautiful red head yell his name, and saw her hide in his arms.

'But I'm not that girl...'

Yet no one could notice... I shed a tear. And ended.

Fear Itself, the scene I call... Savior.

'Don't dream, too far...'

As I felt the heartless air against my legs and feet,

'Don't lose sight of, who you are...'

I felt his arms around my waist...

'Don't remember, that rush of joy...'

My savior...

The End Part 3, the scene I call... A Story.

'He could be that boy...'

He had me on his back... climbing the gates of hell to save me...

'But I'm not that girl...'

And told me a story... of me...

'Every so often we long to steal...'

And I slowly remembered it all...

'To the land of what might have been...'

All the pain and suffering,

'But that doesn't soften the ache we feel...'

That I caused...

'When reality sets back in...'

That he resolved...

Stranded, the scene I call... Witty Remarks.

'Blithe smile...'

I couldn't believe it...

'Lithe limb...'

How could Cyborg say something so...

'She who's win some...'

Painful...

'She wins him...'

So uncalled for...

'Gold hair...'

Jealousy rushed through my veins as he and she...

'At a gentle curl...'

Blushed...

'There's a girl I know...'

Envy, Wrath...

'He loves her...'

Lust...

'So...'

Damned witty remarks. But I guess...

Both song and Rae: I'm not that girl...


A/N: Thanks for reading, probably one of my most serious love stories I've written. SO REVIEW IT!!!

cool, however...
I was saying "Wtf?!" until i saw the fact it was a song
so, i bumped it up 87.32879/Pi notches

Lol, yeah It's from the play Wicked, if you listen to it on youtube or something it's easier to get the story line. Unless you've seen it or read the book or something, then you know what I mean.

This would probably be much better with the song removed. The lyrics just confuse the whole story up and make it almost impossible to follow.

Give it a try?

It's easier to read on fanfiction.net

it has the italics and bolds and stuff

plus it said it was a crossover between the play and the show

did it

Raven's Not That Girl: Moments in Raven Robin History minus song lyrics

The End Part 1, the scene I call... Drama.

He lifted my hands,

And said, "That's what friends do."

And I said, "And as my friend, you have to let go..." and broke free of his tight, comforting grasp.

I icolated them in a transe of my magic as I walked up the long, endless, stone stairs.

As the darkest magic surrounded me, I heard that beautiful red head yell his name, and saw her hide in his arms

Yet no one could notice... I shed a tear. And ended.

Fear Itself, the scene I call... Savior.

As I felt the heartless air against my legs and feet,

I felt his arms around my waist...

My savior...

The End Part 3, the scene I call... A Story.

He had me on his back... climbing the gates of hell to save me...

And told me a story... of me...

And I slowly remembered it all...

All the pain and suffering,

That I caused...

That he resolved...

Stranded, the scene I call... Witty Remarks.

I couldn't believe it...

How could Cyborg say something so...

Painful...

So uncalled for...

Jealousy rushed through my veins as he and she...

Blushed...

Envy, Wrath...

Lust...

Damned witty remarks. But I guess...

Both song and Rae: I'm not that girl...

I'd appreciate if you didn't repost my creations as your own. I'm leaving the story as is, I'm not changing anything in it. This took research and time and point of view imagining to make. I'm not changing it now. I already changed the title so people would get it. It used to be just Unloved, which was useless

RavenxRobin101 wrote:I'd appreciate if you didn't repost my creations as your own. I'm leaving the story as is, I'm not changing anything in it. This took research and time and point of view imagining to make. I'm not changing it now. I already changed the title so people would get it. It used to be just Unloved, which was useless

There's no need to get uppity. It's not like anybody's saying anything unnecessarily harsh or rude to you.

Songfics in general are pretty hit-and-miss, with more misses than hits, because the writer ends up relying too much on the song to carry the story, and not his/her own writing.

Also, why didn't you just link to the story on fanfiction.net? That way it'd be easier to read.

Alright that's enough, if your not here to talk about the STORY, not how it's written or re-posting it, infact, I'd prefer positive feedback please.

RavenxRobin101 wrote:Alright that's enough, if your not here to talk about the STORY, not how it's written or re-posting it, infact, I'd prefer positive feedback please.

Well, no offense lady, but maybe if you're getting negative feedback you should actually pay attention to it instead of dismissing it on principal.

I'd prefer positive feedback please.

ok then.

i liked the parts that werent song lyrics.

those were nice

thank you

and are you seriously 25!?!?
i think not tho cuz ur locations... the moon -_-

RavenxRobin101 wrote:and are you seriously 25!?!?
i think not tho cuz ur locations... the moon -_-

thats the drugs talking

they talk alot

uhhhh... O_O

Yawning Squirtle wrote:

RavenxRobin101 wrote:and are you seriously 25!?!?
i think not tho cuz ur locations... the moon -_-

thats the drugs talking

they talk alot

This is hilarious for reasons that should be obvious.

Deforestation Sensation wrote:

Yawning Squirtle wrote:thats the drugs talking

they talk alot

This is hilarious for reasons that should be obvious.

youre overestimating these kids

its fun to be overestimated in my taste! it helps me improve, anyway, no offense, but i find it kind of weird that a 25 year old is on a forum for a cartoon/comic, i mean, i have no prob, i just found that strange

RavenxRobin101 wrote:its fun to be overestimated in my taste! it helps me improve, anyway, no offense, but i find it kind of weird that a 25 year old is on a forum for a cartoon/comic, i mean, i have no prob, i just found that strange

good point.

i dont know why im here either

xD

Deforestation Sensation wrote:

Yawning Squirtle wrote:

RavenxRobin101 wrote:and are you seriously 25!?!?
i think not tho cuz ur locations... the moon -_-

thats the drugs talking

they talk alot

This is hilarious for reasons that should be obvious.

Yes.

Nice lyrics. Better then I could ever do. I write poems, not songs.

RileyTheTitan wrote:

Deforestation Sensation wrote:

Yawning Squirtle wrote:

RavenxRobin101 wrote:and are you seriously 25!?!?
i think not tho cuz ur locations... the moon -_-

thats the drugs talking

they talk alot

This is hilarious for reasons that should be obvious.

Yes.

Nice lyrics. Better then I could ever do. I write poems, not songs.

LOL Sorry to mislead you if I did but I didn't write this. As said in another post on this I said it was from the musical Wicked. And the song fit her to me.

Well the musical's awsome. :3

XD

its cool, lexi

I have to say.i laughed XD

i luv that scene in the end... [the robin raven hand holding]